After writing and revising your poem in your own document, let's share one revision together. Work Space Revision: ARMS -- Work on "Add" and "Move" Add detail, description, figurative language to elaborate your ideas for your audience [word choice, voice] Remove general, repetitive, unnecessary information [ideas, word choice] Move around the phrases and sentences into a more logical and clear order [organization]. Substitute boring, general words with action and imagery [sights/ sounds]. Elaboration Strategies More information on Elaboration Strategies Detail: 5WsH Who What When Where Why How Description: Sights, Sounds author strategies to create the exact picture you want in your readers mind. |
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