After writing and revising your poem in your own document, let's share one revision together. Work Space
Revision: ARMS -- Work on "Add" and "Move"
Add detail, description, figurative language to elaborate your ideas for your audience [word choice, voice]
Remove general, repetitive, unnecessary information [ideas, word choice]
Move around the phrases and sentences into a more logical and clear order [organization].
Substitute boring, general words with action and imagery [sights/ sounds].
Detail: 5WsH Who What When Where Why How
Description: Sights, Sounds
author strategies to create the exact picture you want in your readers mind.
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